Although these are lovely compositions, I'm not sure what the relationship between the form and the text is. In the second one the text in italics isn't even a complete thought. They look good, but they'll look better if they mean something.
Where is your reflection on the piece of text? That was part of the exercise.
Although these are lovely compositions, I'm not sure what the relationship between the form and the text is. In the second one the text in italics isn't even a complete thought. They look good, but they'll look better if they mean something.
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